Tikaya

"Anxiety is the Dizziness of Freedom" by Ted Chiang Putting this on my list =D Hia Mint, I'm so happy you jumped in with this chapter! (Ignore how I am ...

quick question: are you adding things to THIS document, rather than posting more chapters?

Hmmm Questions! Q1 I think this should be the gold standard for all Nine chapters moving forward :3 Q2 I think all the places I mentioned are worth a second ...

You kinda sound disappointed xd Will answer questions tmr

That sounds like a threat

Does "my cheeks burn with annoyance or rage" work? Ohh that sounds neat! I love reading so dw I will keep up with the story and good luck with the ...

No problem 😊 Happy writing! (The cat sitting on my lap tried really hard to improve this response so here's his addition: qefjjxgshv)

I will wait and see what the plot is bc it feels like you could start hinting at it in the previous chapters too? Because right now, the story feels ...

You would probably love Ravi from my previous chapters XD I love unlikeable characters too correction, Ravi is obviously the best and most likeable. Source? Trust me, I'm perfectly unbiased.

Thought some more and here's what I came up with: Cry is an adult that's not inflected

Hmm if the bf is in Clem's group we need a REALLY good reason for how they started dating.... because it sounded like tensions were pretty high from the beginning ...

Depends on how Cry ended up backing Clem. What he saw in her. I think it would also work if Greer had a bit of... idk fear of Clem? Like ...

If she has punishments she also needs ways to enforce them and I don't see how she could

Of course this helps :3 I'm not yet sure how to make the rather long exposition-y scenes more palatable since we are gonna slowly, slowly explore what the Digital World ...

For the record, a gushingly positive review is perfectly valid if they bring receipts xd That said, I like your writing style and romance is my least favourite genre so ...