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Recycled Sand Watching eyes for them to run at pre-second flash Only to chase them down And apologize to the beachgoer spontaneously chosen as photographer Sand under their feet giving ...

thank you for comment

I have done this exercise before and I agree that it forces many thoughts out onto a concrete material rather then letting them sink into dreams. I also would recommend ...

lol

but the explanation at the end was most definitely unnecessary. :P You seriously need to take it out. :D The end bold paragraph wasn't in my original story that I ...

My first story was called "Danny and the Dinosaur" probaly 5th grade. We had just gotten a new computer, and I convinced my 3 older siblings that I had a ...

Reading "Choke" by Chuck Palahniuk

Thank you Claudette and cadmium for giving me advice. The "I know you'll fight I know you'll fail" spacing was due to copy and pasting straight from Microsoft Word. Originally ...

I agree with her; I didn't really know what was going on here. The poem, which i stated in the subject is through death's eyes. I did not come out ...

Dirty Job’s Confession That day you were sickly in bed I was crawling within you. I came for you, their time will come While they sit helplessly in stiff-backed chairs ...

Laughed my ass off at your intro. The whole Fuck usage is so true. Nice job.

Wrote this for Creative Writing. Could I please get feedback if the plot and idea is expressed clearly enough or that if it requires the reader to think to hard ...

Dirty Job's Confession That day you were sickly in bed I was seething within you. I came for you, their time will come While they sit helplessly in stiff-backed chairs ...