TimmyJake

Timmy hereeee Alright, so I'm going to have to agree with the first reviewer. You've improved so, so much! Like... woah, that was unexpected. There's always a bit of improvement ...

Timmy hereee So this is amazing. My review is going to sound quite contradictory as I go through, because there are conflicting verdicts coming up with this piece. Your style ...

Timmy hereee You mentioned in chat that since this was a first chapter, it would be boring, so I'm going to spend the most time in this review on that. ...

Timmy hereee I figured it would be best for both of us if I started from where I left off rather than catching the last few parts. Besides, I hate ...

Timmy hereee As usual, I'm popping into a book midway, so I won't have many of the details to help me give you a review on all topics possible. Instead, ...

Timmy here! An initial impression of your book is unimpressive, I'll admit. You don't weave a sad story filled with teary drama, or an action-packed thriller with muscly men and ...

Timmy here! I'm sorry for being the guy that shows up at the last chapter and can only critique what's on the surface - the small things that, while matter ...

Timmy hereee How long has it been since I reviewed a piece for you? Months? O.0 I kind of feel bad about that... a teensy bit, like imagine the smallest ...

Timmy here! So I'll get right to the point of this review and skip any fluff I usually throw in to make the receiver of the review feel good about ...

Review. Um, righttt. How does one review poetry again? O.0 I will do my best to read through this and find something to nitpick for you here, but to tell ...

:( This was a really sad story, and something I can actually relate to in some ways. I like the emotion you used here, and how you conveyed your character's ...

Timmy hereee Don't faint... It's only been about four months since my last review. ;) Being a reader that jumped into this in the middle of the book, I won't ...

Hey there c: I have ten minutes to spare today, and while that may not be what you're used to get from me... I'll do my best to give you ...

Hello, Timmy here! So before I head into this, I'll tell you that I haven't read your previous chapters... and so have no knowledge of your plot or the personalities ...

Timmy here for a few thoughts! Before I begin, let me just say I loved this piece. I'm a Catholic, and I used to go to a church with this ...