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Re: Ironclaw: Chapter 2, Part 2
Timmy here So they're getting to know each other better. Yay for that. It is always a nice thing to see some character interaction, because not only is it a ...
Dec 4, 2014 -
Re: I'll be the Sky, You'll be the Moon *edited*
Timmy here This will be a short review for a short poem. I will try to be completely honest with you here. This piece doesn't hold up to the title. ...
Dec 3, 2014 -
Re: If you're Peter, I'm Wendy
Timmy here As you requested, I am heeere. I would have spotted this piece soon enough, though. The title is very clickable. xD I thought your idea with this was ...
Dec 3, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 36
Timmy here So that was what you meant by McGriddles. I have never had one of those things, so I can't attest their horrible deliciousness, but knowing McDonalds.... Yeah, this ...
Dec 1, 2014 -
Re: Yesterday's dusk
Timmy here This will be a quickie, since your pieces are too perfect to do anything except read over and over and over. One thing I find myself wondering as ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Don't Be Afraid
Timmy here I am not the best poetry reviewer, so my review will probably be pretty naïve and stick to the facts - but I will do my best. So ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: monotony
Timmy here This piece was so lovely. You usually have a great deal of descriptive words and floral meanings/images thrust into the bulk of your poetry - which is perfectly ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: TFoA - Chapter 14
Timmy here! So since I haven't reviewed any of your other chapters, I shall just go about this for any technical errors I see, and just survey the plot from ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 3
Timmy here! Since I have not looked at any of the other chapters so you will have to excuse me if I avoid all character and plot issues there may ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 10.1
Timmy here So I believe I already read this piece, too. I had no idea you showed me this many of your chapters, but I suppose we were on a ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Cogito
Timmy here So I have had this page open since you posted the work, wanting to review it, but not knowing what to say. I am going to struggle through ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 29 Part 1
Timmy here! So I think I shall go through this as I always do, just as I read. I tell you this a lot, don't I? Perhaps I should just ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: The Broken House
Timmy here I thought this was the most unique idea you have ever had in your writing. Seriously. When I read through this, the thing that kept circulating through my ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Shattered Crowns - Chapter One (Gregor)
Timmy here I have a bit to say, and hopefully I will find the energy to say everything I want to. I am quite tired right now. hee-hee You ready? ...
Nov 29, 2014 -
Re: October
Timmy here So I will keep this review short, since I don't have much to say on this piece, and the poem is short in itself. Hopefully you can find ...
Nov 28, 2014