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TimmyJake

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  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Parent Magnet *editing*

    Timmyjake here to pull this out of the cobwebs and give you a review! Ok, I found this really good and entrancing. I'll just hit my little nitpicks. In a ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chess And Other Games

    Timmyjake here to give you a review on World Review Cup Day! We're tryin to win here!! Ok, I will just hit this for the big spots in punctuation to ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Spiritual, General Re: Four Walls.

    Timmyjake here to give you a short review! This is a very short story, and its not really a story, almost like a essay. I will review it as best ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: Do You Remember Jonnie Casey? (3/3)

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! I haven't read the other parts of it, although I probably should. This was in the Green Room and on behalf of West ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Shadowed Pryde: Chapter One

    Timmyjake here to leave you with a review! I have never watched the X-Men, although I want to. I need to! So this review will be given to you without ...

    Dec 27, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Spiritual Re: It's time to say Goodbye

    Timmyjake here to give you a review as promised. I'm punctual, too! ;) Ok, so the first thing I noticed was the lack of 18+ language. Unless I missed something, ...

    Dec 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: 'End of Year' Poem

    Timmyjake here to leave you a short review. I shouldn't be on YWS right now. *Looks each way* Coast clear. Here I go! :D You rhyme each one! I am ...

    Dec 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: You're getting warmer

    Timmyjake here to leave you a review on Global Warming, oh, err, You're Getting Warmer. To be honest, I don't agree that the polar ice caps are melting, and if ...

    Dec 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Simpliest Thing

    Timmyjake here to leave you a short review!! Ok, I really liked this. It's very emotional and passionate! I will just go through a few nitpicks of mine now... Ok, ...

    Dec 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Don't give up...

    Timmyjake here to leave you with a short review! I loved this poem! A lot of people prefer poems that don't rhyme, I don't. I like seeing that systematical rhyming ...

    Dec 27, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Freedom

    Timmyjake to give you a short review! This is really good! You have this way of describing the setting that just lays it out so well. I will just hit ...

    Dec 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Supernatural Re: French Hens and the Spirit (Part 3 Twelve Days Before Christmas) *Edited*

    Timmyjake here to give you another review! You have been challenged to write these twelve short stories... I have challenged myself to wait for and review each of them... Here ...

    Dec 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: Health Is Wealth

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! My grandfather is a heavy smoker, so I know what its like. I'm trying something new here. Never done real quotes before. Lets ...

    Dec 25, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Death Won't Set You Free

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! This is very touching, almost poetic really. Its beautiful! It will help everyone who is depressed! My only nitpick is the beginning, which ...

    Dec 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: One Thing

    Timmyjake here to leave you a review! I will just hit my little nitpicks!! At the first paragraph I want you so badly, but I don't tell you. Sorry, I ...

    Dec 25, 2013


I wonder if people felt the freedom in our culture to love louder, if they'd be quicker to say "I miss you" when the absence of someone is felt instead of just thinking it.
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