TimmyJake

Thanks for the amazingly fast review, Tulip! :D You're so awesome.

but harsh. :( mesa sowwy

Actually, I think the real way of fooling people on YWS is to have a piece on spotlight that is an actual work, and not something written just for Spotlight ...

Thanks for your awesome review, tulip! So encouraging

Yayyy! You found a lot of the redundancy and stuff. :P And you did awesome. Thank you, Livvy. You're awesome.

I don't have much time on, but I will try to answer your questions and refutes as quickly and as good as possible. Here we go... 1) I mean New ...

Thank you. :)

I am online, sillyyyyy! Welcome! :D

You're welcome. :)

My apologies. Even with your amazing tutorship, my text language still fails miserably. But hehehe. I believe I may be even with you now.

awww... how cute! hehe

Erm, no? It's your style, and I love it. Why, has someone called it flat? I shall pound them.

my older reviews are so terrible...

Welcome. :D I do the same thing with repeating words. *Grumbles*

Thanks for the amazing review, Noelle! It is very helpful, and brings up many issues with this chapter - and those ahead. I will work on what you mentioned, edit ...