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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Rise of the Flames (prologue)

    I've read over it again, and it's way better than before :) I couldn't really spot any obvious mistakes, but there's some sentences I think you could make better so ...

    Jul 3, 2011


The strongest people are not those who show their true strength in front of us but those who win battles we know nothing about.
— Unknown