Tomas

Thanks for the comments! All well received and no hard feelings about anything, if you understand it great. I am glad you liked it Velvet. If you don't understand it ...

To be first seen bright in light, my sun, no; but a star born asunder. What you are I wonder? Continuity begs you are a wonder. Must you hold a ...

I didn't care so much for your simultaneous repetition on a few of your words, however, I did like the words you chose. "like the smell of woods" I love ...

I can understand the meaning and feeling to this poem, of course, I think most of us can. I like the title, Troubled Hands. But I liked even more the ...

Heart I nontransparent beat reap current lands upon thy apart. Start the hierophants clement it heaps seeps in to augment arguments I find out. :) My God! Can our relations ...

I understand your poem a lot better now and the message is clear-cut and to the point in unique way. I like it much better then before. Good Job!

I thought this was good. It was real feeling thrown out in a poetic format. Its almost like reading this, put me inside the characters head(whether it was you, or ...

Last night I dreamt of you We were looking at pictures It was the most beautiful thing I swear For a second in the dream our eyes met, It was ...

I like this. With the whole two hemispheres in the ending, is almost making the poem a metaphor to something. Darkness and light, good and evil, right and wrong. It ...

I liked this poem! Probably because I can relate to it, but no really, this poem is fluent and has great discriptive attributes needed in good poetry..

Nice

I'm slowly falling adrift Pacing myself as I thrift through the dark errie night in which I encumber my deepest of sorrowful regrets. I'm slowly falling adrift To what I ...