Tomothy_Mayhem

Synopsis: William, after a terrible incident, finds himself torn between two realities as he comes in conflict with the Mad Duke, God of Maddness Thanks again, Tom

Chapter I - Fortune Cookie As all the clocks struck 7 o’clock, William Sinclair moaned. No matter how many years he stayed, stuck in the same old routine, he still ...

First, beyong anything, I hesitated to start reading because of the format. Some better paragraph spacing would be much better, easier to read especially. "I swam around the lake like ...

Thanks heaps for the review! fixed the errors in my copy (haven't updated the forum copy). Anyone else?

Paul Holiday lives in a small sea-side town called Nichols Bay; there isn’t much there, a post-office, a general store, a cafe, a hotel, a bait and tackle store and ...

Comments are appreciated Dreadful weather, it seems to have been following me ever since that damn farmer noticed me hiding in the back of his truck. I can feel the ...

Reviews would be appreciated. Thanks

do I smell an appearance of Odin or someone similar?

I quite like this one. Very good explanation of a battlefield, I'm not one to be giving grammatical advise but I do want to here more of Archion and the ...

thanks! I'll get to it. Please read chapter II if you like it. -Tom

Alright, here we have Chapter II of The Brotherhood of Silence. Post your thoughts please :) Chapter II: Oaksville Tower It would be ten years until Reman’s past finally caught ...

Thanks heaps guys! I'll post Chapter II up now :) I've gone through and edited the story Lauren. Thanks again, and hope you enjoy Chapter II, -Tom

Would you mind making some comments please?[/color] Chapter I: Full Moon It smelt as if death itself was lingering near Reman as he sat in the cold with his legs ...

Thanks for that, I've just gone through the copy on my computer and have fixed the problems you specified. Although, I only changed the coma with a period in the ...