Random avatar

ToriChanceAlton

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Other Re: Ecliptic: Episode One - Streetlight [WIP]

    Thank you so much for the nitpicks, they go a long way. I'll be sure to tweak upon that. My issue as you stated was mainly keeping a sentence going ...

    Jun 6, 2018
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Other Re: Ecliptic: Episode One - Streetlight [WIP]

    I was actually going to read the "Conics Unfortunately" series on here and review it when I was finished. That'll be a while, but it seems like a hell of ...

    Jun 6, 2018
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Other Re: Ecliptic: Episode One - Streetlight [WIP]

    Wow. Thank you so much, this was exactly the kind of feedback I wanted. I love the concept of threading, I've never really thought about it. You have really helped ...

    Jun 5, 2018


Depression is messin with the wrong person over here cuz in the months that I was doing better I was sharpening my weapons for this war.
— Kaia