Torigirl15

if anyone has any suggustion of wht i could name this, i would appreciate it! =) hahahaChapter Three- Confuse the Crap out of Iris Day We almost made it to ...

this is my edited chapters 1 and 2, plus i added a prologue... hope its better than the last one i posted. Prologue The silence was more than I could ...

the strawberry banana sobe is a joke between me and my friend, i don't know if im actually going to use it. =)and i really don't know if i like ...

more explaining... x.x and i do need to change a couple of things, but im not sure how to yet, so i left it as is. When I woke up ...

this is one of my favorite parts... =) hope you like it too. Chapter 6-My butt gets kicked, an d not for the first time Smack! Came the sound of ...

Chapter Seven-Home Hestia came up with the plan. I was to go home, tell my mom that they called last minute at school, and that I had to go right ...

This is pretty long, sorry. I wanted to finish posting chapter 7 though... so yeah. =) and still no title!! augh, if anyone has any idea.... x.x i'm stumped. I ...

Please tell me what you think, looking for advice about whether it's good enough to continue. I'll be sure to return the comments. Thanks. Also, I don't really know what ...

Okay, so i have been trying out a few different beginnings to my book, since i have had writers block for the past few weeks. Hopefully this will get me ...

This is yet another beginning to the book i hope to write, and yes i know this sucks. So please comment, and help me fix it up in anyway you ...

Yet another beginning. This is similar to another prologue i posted, but more in depth. Thanks!Prologue- Secret Club House: A man is not old until regrets take the place of ...

Hi! If you haven't read the prologue, you might want to in order to understand these two chapters. Tear it apart, and have fun with it! XD Chapter One: Homecoming ...

Spoiler! : Alright, so this is extremely rough, and has no action in it. Sorry, but I promise it gets better. Please don't be too harsh with the story line, ...

This is a really weird way to write, and probably is hard to understand at times. Really rough, but I wanted to see what people thought of the style and ...