Trashcan

Thanks for the review! A few people didn't pay much mind to the italicized text and were a little confused because of it, so I thought it was necessary to ...

Hey! Thanks for the in-depth review, you didn't say anything offensive, don't worry. I appreciate that you brought some things to light that I didn't notice when writing, like the ...

Thanks for the compliments! Just one thing, our main character isn't unnamed, you can see what character's point of view the chapter is from below the author's note (text in ...

No, you're not too harsh at all. I'll be sure to check out a how-to on flow and stuff like that. :)

Thanks for the in-depth review! I agree that my sentences are choppy and most of the background characters are boring, I'll try to fix that in future installments. The story ...

Yeah, I only realized how short and choppy most of it was after I wrote it. Thanks for the insight on the numbers, I didn't know that. :)

I'm glad you like it! :) I won't spoil anything major, just a warning, but most of the characters don't have a very good relationship with their parents. There's no ...

Hmm... Do you have a computer at home? If so I'd use that to write instead, maybe have a parent proofreader it.

Aw, that's a shame. Maybe have a friend or teacher proofread it first then, preferably an English teacher.