TriSARAHtops

Hello! I noticed that your third chapter was looking a little lonely in the Green Room, so I thought I'd rescue it. Obviously, I wanted to start from the beginning, ...

Alrighty... I'm going to quit being a lazy spud and finally review this thing. So, pretty much everything's already been pointed out, from the looks of things. I've skimmed the ...

I THINK I RECOGNISE THE SONG YOU USED FOR THE CHAPTER TITLE! Also, hi again. So, I guess I'm basically caught up, now, finally. This was another great chapter, and ...

Alrighty! Almost caught up! Just out of curiosity, why was chapter 12 split into two parts rather than two different chapters? Because this felt like it was a whole new ...

Hello there! How's about a review! I've got a few things I'd like to talk about with this story. I'll start with some of the more specific, technical stuff, then ...

I'm back! I've been meaning to get back to Alpha for ages, but now I'm reviewing. Definitely. I don't have massive amounts of stuff to pount out, but I'll start ...

Hello again! I'm not sure how much I'll have to contribute in terms of a review in regards to this chapter that hasn't already been pointed out. I'll just ramble ...

Hiya Wolfie! Here to review... I really liked this. I was really impressed by it, and it had a real feel of a Western. I had a couple of quibbles, ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! How's about a review? Okay, so usually I'd start with the nitpicks, but this time around I had none. That's not to say that there ...

Hiya! TriSARAHtops here with a review! :) I really liked this story. The start, in particular, had a really fantastic sense of humour to it that hooked me in right ...

Okay, I'm finally reviewing this. Yay! I think most of the nitpicky stuff has already been pointed out, and I don't think there was anything that majorly leapt out at ...

Hello! I'm planning on staying up to see a lunar eclipse, so I thought I'd write you a review. Just thought you'd like to know. :) I think all the ...

Hello! Thought I'd pop by and give your work a quick review. I'm intrigued by this, I'll say that much. Your description of it piqued my attention, but I finished ...

I've been meaning to get back to this novel for a while, especially given how helpful you've been in your reviews of my own story. So I'm back, and hopefully ...

Hi there! How's about a review? You're off to a pretty good start. You've introduced some characters and a situation, both of which look interesting, and I'd be interested to ...