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Sorry it's taken me a while to reply to this, but thanks for the review!

Thank you! :)

Hi OniiChan, thanks for taking the time to review! This poem is in free verse, so there is deliberately no rhyming pattern (or rhyming at all, in this case, unless ...

Hey, thanks for commenting! Before Sunrise was one of the inspirations (idk if that's the right word?) for the poem and the original version of this actually referenced the film ...

Not a problem!

You're very welcome! Sorry it's taken me a while to get back to you. Oh, I totally feel the same about introducing the narrator when you're writing in first person ...

Thanks for the review! So to answer your question about the school system, year twelve is our last year of secondary school, we have exams in October/November and then university ...

No problem! I did wonder if the modern feel was a nod to the movies, but admittedly it's been a while since I watched a Disney movie. I feel like ...

Thank you lovely

Thank you! I think Lena's name pops up a couple of times, but it's probably buried in dialogue. It's one of those things that I find weird and awkward to ...

Thank you!!!!

Thank you!! Yeah, I was trying to work out how to balance the Chris thing. Mostly because he barged his way into the story (I never planned on him existing ...

Will do!

No worries! Happy to help :)

Thank you again! Super helpful since I've just started rewriting, will definitely take into consideration. Much appreciated!