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I'm Rudigo Sol. Looks like we're competing! XD I was contemplating going rogue like I did last time but decided I should join a team instead. :-)

Awesome! :-D I shall review it for review day tomorrow! :-)

Awesome! I don't have a clue why it was double posting either but it looks as though it's stopped now. :-) Yay! Looking forward to reading it!

That's a pretty cool idea there! Even if I was too thick to pick it up until this chapter :-D

You're welcome, and I'm glad I didn't seem too harsh. If you'd like the next chapter reviewed let me know. :-)

You're welcome! :-) Looking forward to chapter two!

Thank you! Yeah... I was a little worried about Todd and Adela's relationship coming off a bit insta-romancy. The fact that it does develop quickly is part of the plot ...

You're welcome. :-) Glad to know you appreciate the lettuce thing. My brain goes on weird tangents sometimes.

That's actually an awesome idea! :-) Thank you again!

Thanks for the review! Everything you've suggested is a massive help... I've already gone through and added her name in the dialogue a few times, kind of trying to get ...

Okay, going to have to fix that too! Thanks. :-)

Thanks for the review! I was a bit worried about the hair thing - I knew it was going on for a bit long but there were a lot of ...

Thanks Wolfare! Your review was really helpful, and confirms some things that I was concerned about. In my first draft I got to the bell scene and realised that I ...

I know, I've started switching tenses all the time now. 8/

The way I read it it seemed like April thought that she wanted to have sex, and convinced herself she wanted to but deep down didn't. As for Daniel, it ...