Trident

I'll be around the next couple of days for reviews so post something if you want a great review! I critique roughly but wisely!

Hi leebass, my review is posted. Hope the revision process is a good one!

Hello, I've come to give you my review. I hope it can be of some help! First off, I'm not so sure about the title. I used to love to ...

Review posted! Best of luck!

All right it's time I delivered on this. Firstly, I'm completely unfamiliar with script format, so I'll be utterly useless for any conventions in that sense. With that said, here's ...

Atop our complex seventeen, There lie a garden with a view. And there a yellow flower bloomed, A daffodil I'd not yet seen. It rested in a crannied space, A ...

I thought I would revive this thread, seeing as I have already started one of these. Feel free to leave a work and I will hopefully get around to a ...

Hi ireylcadence, I'll give this a go here. I do not remember how I came hence Into this pitted earth--entrenched And caked in dust revered as bones That first line ...

Hi ultraviolet, it's been awhile since I've been to YWS, so forgive me if my critting is a little rusty. Firstly, your title is really what grabbed me, so kudos ...

Thanks all. If you want to read it, you can find it here:

I don't get around here very often anymore due to school and such, but I just thought I'd let everyone know that one of my stories that I had posted ...

I read about this before. I think that school official should be fired and possibly even face criminal charges of some sort. It's really quite disgusting that anyone would use ...

For sure. I feel like if there are several mistakes in someone's critique, I almost feel obligated to ignore it. If you can't be serious about such a small thing ...

Hi torigirl. The first thing I noticed was the rhyme scheme, which was pretty good, but I suggest getting rid of it all together. I'm not sure rhyming your lines ...

Ahaha. I just made a post about this, but you're on top of it!