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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Pull the Trigger

    hey Trina here to review :) first thing, I dont know if it is meant to be there but you have repeated the word 'of' twice in the first sentence... ...

    Apr 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Snow: The Tale of a Cold Heart (Prologue)

    Hey here to review ya :) Wow this sounds awesome! I definitely want to carry on reading it.. I really like it in books when they use a short sentence ...

    Apr 11, 2014


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge