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Re: Leaving
This was great for a first poem. At times, the rhymes seemed a little forced, and it interrupted the flow of syllables. Such as: I embrace you one last time, ...
May 19, 2011 -
Re: Mothers Day
It really is a wonderful day! Only a few errors here and there: Mothers day Is a wonderful day and the best day of the year "day" should be capitalized. ...
May 19, 2011 -
Re: Book Burnings
I go to a church where the Christians are very tolerant of the different aspects of media, and our group has talked about Landover Baptist Church's comments on Harry Potter. ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: One Plus One
Sassykat pointed out most of the *very few* errors. This is so sweet- your dad and his fiance will definitely love this, since I do! With whom is you spend ...
May 18, 2011