Trudeau44

I will be making the next chapter longer for all those wondering why it's so short, and I will try to use everyones suggestions while creating my next chapter in ...

I like your writing keep it up :)

Thanks! no point in someone telling you why something's bad, if your not going to fix it.

No I don't think it's incorrect I just picky that way :)

I really enjoyed reading your story. It sounds like it's going to be an interesting read, but you should consider changing a few things for example: "My pulse rate gradually ...

Thanks for the review, lostthought. I will have to fix those mistakes. It's only my first time writing so I'm still new, but with everyone help I'll be a pro ...

Thanks for the review, Flame. I will have to fix those mistakes. :) Looking forward to seeing, what you have to say next time. Trudeau44

P.S Spoiler Alert: There is a reason he can't remember. The Psychiatrist thinks he has post-traumatic stress disorder, but he thinks there is something more to it.

Thanks for the review. I don't feel bad when other's criticize my work because that's the only way I'll ever improve. This is my first public piece so it's interesting ...

Thx for the review, I will definitely have to rethink the chapter. This is my first published piece so I'm still learning any tips you can offer will be helpful.