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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Coward

    Great thoughts! Really intelligent, thoughtful stuff here. I must point out, though, that "opinions" is spelled with only one P. But the content here was very good. Thanks for posting ...

    Jul 10, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Kurt

    Kurt met himself when he was three years old. He didn’t know it at the time, but not because he wouldn’t have understood. In fact, it may have been a ...

    Jul 10, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Human Clay

    Very good. Very interesting. I have only one correction which I'll get out of the way, and then go on to praise. In the first stanza, you spelled "lightning" as ...

    Jul 10, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Fallen

    Very good. Perfect grammar, interesting rhyme scheme. I had trouble with the meter at first, but as it went along I really liked it. An interesting story, too... I didn't ...

    Jul 10, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Changing World

    As has been noted, your opening sentence was killer. Brilliant, genius, whatever you want to call it... I loved it. However, I agree that "day" should be changed. Not quite ...

    Jul 10, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Flat World

    Part 1 Imagine the world, so round and so large, With oceans that harbor the whale and the barge, That licks upon land, miles wide, I am told, With mountains ...

    Jul 10, 2011


More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes