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TwoHeadedDuck

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: The Withered Sky- Prologue.

    I like what you have so far. It's a great introduction to your story, leaving plenty unsaid to continue on. It does however give a few pieces of information, which ...

    Oct 8, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Neverland's Child

    Beautiful! I love how you portrayed the characters, they work really well. A few of the sentences don't flow as well as the others, and I find the beginning few ...

    Oct 8, 2015


Don't aim at success--the more you aim at it and make it a target, the more you are going to miss it. For success, like happiness, cannot be pursued; it must ensue, and it only does so as the unintended side-effect of one's dedication to a cause greater than oneself or as the by-product of one's surrender to a person other than oneself.
— Viktor E. Frankl