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  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Broken

    Thanks! This really motivates me. I can't say it enough, thanks for the help and support

    Sep 12, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Broken

    The two people, believe it or not, have absolutely no relevence to the story. "Daniel" is the typical troubled teen. And "Dylan" is just a friend struggling to help. The ...

    Sep 10, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Broken

    I really appreciate the review! The Humpty Dumpty part was just a typo I didn't notice. But the rest genuinely helps. Thanks a lot for taking the time to review!

    Sep 10, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: This Aunt I had

    I absolutely love your writing style. Seriously, wow. Tiny gramatical errors, but nothing huge. I'm thoroughly impressed. Just, wow. The best thing I could say is to proof-read and edit. ...

    Sep 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Spiritual Re: story thang (I need a title help) (Part 1)

    Woah. I'm extremely impressed. It's detailed, lengthy, and gave me chills. I love your character development. I really love this. Woah. Maybe, though, you should split this up into pieces? ...

    Sep 9, 2013


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