TylynRae

Great poem, but what I didn't understand is Why exactly you capitalized every word. I get it if you're trying to add emphasis, though thats not the 'correct' way to ...

Aww, this is really cute. =] I think the overall message is amazing, and with a little bit of work it would be really good. The thing that I was ...

Hey there =]] So I'm going to have to agree with the previous reviewer on all counts. I just didn't feel like typing out everything when I agreed with them ...

Hey there =]. First off, I'd like to congratulate you for posting this. There have been a few times where I've posted very personal things, and sometimes its hard to ...

Hey butters! Firstly, I liked that little 'you'll have to read it' note. Haha =]. But wow! The first two stanzas really got my attention, the first one was definitely ...

WT! I missed you so vera much! And FINALLY, I've very much craved your writing ever since God The Dealer, but anyway. =] I loved it. You have such a ...

Hey Butter! I finally got internet, so now I'm back! =] Anyway, here as requested. I really loved this piece, I only saw a few little things here and there, ...

Gah, I do love reading your work =] There's always so much going on, so much to interpret and feel. This poem in particular has a lot of emotion. I ...

Hello there =]. I think the beginning of this poem was really good. Everything up to the last two stanzas was strong with a really good rhythm. It kept me ...

Hello there =]. I will have to be honest, and say that this isn't my favorite. Not that it wasn't good, I just wasn't feeling it. The rhythm jumped a ...

This was wonderful. I could totally relate to this, which is what makes poetry good, when someone can relate I mean. But anyway, I don't think I saw any mistakes, ...

Woahs. This surprised me a bit! Very steamy stuff you have here! So anyway, I think overall this was pretty good. It would be nice if you elaborated a bit ...

Hi there. I have to agree with you on the stereotypical issue, but I agree with the previous reviewer. You should definitely rate your stuff. Twelve year olds could click ...

You're stories are huge, but so worth the read. Each one of them is just... god. I feel like I'm right there next to them, and though I know absolutely ...

Hey Persy! Okay, so I really REALLY liked this poem. It was a little bit difficult to understand at first, but if all poems were easy to understand no one ...