Utopia

Thank you for the review! I also think that apart from he second and third stanza the poem was kind of forced, but I'm working on it.

Thank you for the points and the feedback. I wasn't sure about posting this at first because I too thought it was 'childish' but it turned out to be okay.

Thank you for your review. I think I might extend my story to answer your questions.

Thank you for the review. Sorry about the ending, it was a technical problem and shouldn't be there.