VampX13

Personally, I like it the way it is. It's sort of an awkward and sharp twist but just because that wasn't what I was expecting. I do think Sirius and ...

Ouch. I actually did work pretty hard on this. The only thing I was unable to fix, which bothers me, is the ryhming. Oww.

Thank-you also! I heart feedback! The main conflict has not been highlighted yet. These first few entries are meant to establish the daily going-ons in Emily's life. Her world will ...

Thank-you for the feedback. Now to clear up a few things: Emily is Canadian and is in the french emersion program at her school. She often times uses french when ...

Thanks.

Kill For You There's nothing I wouldn't do, Anything -- I'd kill for you. I see you walking down the hall. Can you see me? You walk right past me: ...

Thanks for the feedback. Yes, I didn't really want it go anywhere in particular. It was just a way of me showing how hypocritical I can be and humanity in ...

Oh God. Early school? I know how you feel, trust me. My school starts at 8:00 but it's a long ways from my house so I need to be ready ...

These were just some ideas that I want to unleash: things buzzing around in my head. It's not my best work, far from it, but I enjoyed writing it. ---------------------- ...

CAST, SO FAR Amelia (17)- Looks like this. (played by VampX13) Eric (21)- Looks like this. (played by misspriss) If you are talking out of context, please, post in dark ...

I like it. Reminds me of a cast party and my sometimes dearly pathetic boyfriend. However there are a few things that need tidying. Sometime it's overly descriptive. I would ...

"We" is a character in the story but I can't introduce them as such because it ruins the whole surprise. (I can only hint at it's character with things like ...

Written about a fourteen-year-old Canadian girl for fourteen-year-old Canadian girls. This is the journal of a soon to be fourteen year old girl, with big dreams, huge dilemmas, a hi-larious ...

Myth: Thank-you, I am glad you liked it. You are correct about the ... "about". Therefore I shall smite it! Griffinkeeper: Actually I put the prologue there to introduce the ...

Whoops! You're right. *Scurries off to fix that.* (Indeed! Woot-woot, Anne Rice! :>)