VanillaXKnight

I like this! The rhyme schemes and the verse structure are very interesting. It feels like you were creating this poem with a melody in mind. The metaphors and the ...

Hi! It's been a while since I did a review. This little verse invokes an unusual kind of imagery in my mind. I like it. There's nothing to nitpick here. ...

Hi! This poem is short, but it's strong. It consists only of a few words, but it holds a thousand messages. You kinda explained already in the second line that ...

Hi socks! Van here! :) Personally, I don't how if I love or hate this poem, as you've just reminded me my very greatest fear: death. But as a reader, ...

Hi, fellow newbie! Welcome to YWS! This is my third review, so I may criticize things that are supposed to be right. First of, I really like the poem. The ...

Hi! First off, your idea is interesting and has grear potential. I would love to see this developed into a story that incorporates this idea to the plot. It would ...