Vari

You're right. I'm rereading a few of my favorite novels and especially taking notice of the sentence structure and the parts that evoked emotion. Might be a while before I ...

Me likey - decided that in the first few paragraphs. Not in the mood to review though xD ~Vari

Thanks for the review. I haven't written anything in years so it's quite hard to get back on that bicycle... But this story is in my head and it isn't ...

Now that I know what the story was based on, I understand. Both the third-gender and the question whether Kerani's gender is ambiguous. Maybe this could somehow be incorporated into ...

The use of 'you' instead of 'I' or 'he' makes this interesting. I hope you turn it into a novel because I'd keep reading :] What's the name of the ...

Awwh stop you'll make me blush :p Thanks for your encouragement, it was kind of a spur of the moment write and I was surprised at how well it flowed ...

I look forward to reading more :] ~ Vari

Wow, may I just say that I was drawn in immediately? Although I was somewhat confused for a minute about the MC's age, that didn't deter me from reading on. ...

Thank you for your reply, I appreciate someone telling my story does have it faults but doesn't seem to completely suck (at the moment). This is the first time I've ...