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Re: Photo Critiques
those pictures are amazing they really tell me u like the small things in nature that nobody really notices and take the time to look at
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Love's Bullet chapter 1 part1
Chapter 1 The Boy Assassin It was a dark and lonely place. I was inside a very damp cell and all I could see was the outline of my skin. ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: The Breakout
Prologue I am Vatten Vatra.I am a human that was made into a a vampire since my birth. I'm a bloodsucking sun hating vampire. I'm not the only one though. ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: The Janitors (Prologue - Final Edit)
Hey I'm Vatten I love the way you have the son of a scientist who gave the main character powers. I think you describe the setting and how the story ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: A Ghostly Encounter: Part 1
Prologue I am Vatten Vatra.I am a person that was turned into a damn blood sucking vampire.I am not the only one though.There is another,but he is older.His name is ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter One)
Prologue I am Vatten Vatra.I am a person that was turned into a damn blood sucking vampire.I am not the only one though.There is another,but he is older.His name is ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: The Accidental Rebellion, Prologue
i enjoyed your opening paragraph. IT had got me hooked the way you described your charaters and the way they feeled
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: Purple Magic (old)
that was awesome
Mar 3, 2009