VeninAbyss

I really liked this. I love the word choice and the imagery I see in my head. "...reach beyond our bodies like phantom limbs that stretch and grow into beautiful ...

I can see this is an old post, but I really loved this. It has amazing imagery. I love the way it flows so effortlessly. Dreams are our fantasies, what ...

I really liked this. It's something I can really relate to. I really enjoyed the chorus. I really like the line, "I am less and less alive." It really shows ...

Wow. I definitely really liked this. The poem flowed very nicely. I love the rhyme scheme very much. The poem has a very eerie feeling, of death and longing. Longing ...

I really like the way you broke up each stanza. I myself, tend to write my poems in such a free stanza. It really works for this poem. I really ...

I agree with aVeryThoughtfulBeing. It really is beautiful. I can relate to it in both perspectives, the one watching this person destroying themselves, and the one who is destroying themselves. ...

Well, I definitely understand what this poem is saying. It's something I can relate to. I think you broke the sentences awkwardly though, the way you started on some lines. ...

Overall, It was a good narrative. Some spelling errors, and accidental repeats of words. It has good emotion, something I can definitely relate to. I think it flows nicely, but ...

I really think this is beautiful. It's a bittersweet feeling, both happy and sad. I agree that you do write with self-awareness and lots of emotions. It's both touching and ...