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Re: carnival funhouse mirror
Okay but actually I feel like this song explains so much about your poetry? Like the way things flow together and how the ideas move and overlap.
Apr 6, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
@alliyah Chinese poetry actually has a very long history of being a visual art! It was combined with calligraphy for so long that they are in some ways hard to ...
Apr 6, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Free Song: Home Again Lyrics The wind kisses my skin, and the fir trees sway. I drive along I-5 by the light of day. See the apple orchard from the ...
Apr 5, 2024 -
Re: on code and conlangs
Your rondeau is lovely! Time is an excellent subject for this form, since the rhyme scheme is so repetitive, and I think the -our sounds give it a very round ...
Apr 4, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Free Poem 1: things I know how to say I can't say much. My mom taught me enough so that I can say I can say a little Chinese. Ran ...
Apr 4, 2024 -
Re: fleeting summer daydream
The visual structure of "Sounds from the Walls" is so strong, and I love how it plays into the idea of being trapped or cornered!
Apr 4, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Free song verse take one: See the apple orchard from the highway fruit so red and ripe it must be gourmet Bite in through the skin and feel the juice ...
Apr 4, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Wednesday Haiku 1: 04/03 What April showers? Snowflakes fly flat as the plains and bring May flooding.
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: Sunbathing in a parking lot
Idk if you meant to do this or not... but there are so many 's' sounds in this poem and it really makes the whole thing sound very cohesive out ...
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Intro + Outro Lyrics: The wind brushes my skin, and the fir trees sway. I drive along I-5 by the light of day. --- A lot happens musically --- The ...
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: carnival funhouse mirror
Love the ending on this one! A good turn of phrase is always fun.
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: of dusk and dragonflies
It's always such a treat to see nature and seasons-themed haikus. It's really in that haiku spirit. And I love the personification and the action verbs in yours!
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: Origami Hearts Shaped like Poetry
Ahhh! It's always so fun to see poetry in the format of things we wouldn't usually see as poetic. Love the recipe for disaster.
Apr 3, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Chao Mien Western Update #1 No Ordinary Town Out West (includes snippets from Something Wrong, Seek Your Fortune) “Western whistle” into a “trotting” banjo riff COWBOY 1: THIS IS NO ...
Apr 2, 2024 -
Re: The Long Drive
Free Song Groove: edit: lol was looking at this and realized those sixteenth rests in the treble clef should be eights. haha whoops.
Apr 2, 2024