Ventomology

Heya! It's a fabulous day for catching up no? Let's see what I can tack on to Ender's lovely review. In Response to Ender: While I probably have explained the ...

Ha ha! I will catch up with a vengeance! Now let's get this review rolling, shall we? General Comments: In addition to Miss Hart's comment on varying sentence length, I ...

They are probably in hot water, but not 'they all three of them.' Also, I am now caught up! I think all that baking helped with my motivation. Now, moving ...

Um, harsh? I am starting to not like Mrs Williams. Maybe instead of sending him home, someone could find a way to prevent him from falling asleep in class. Anyways, ...

Finally... I made it... after baking cookies for five hours. I suppose I should get on with the review so I can catch up, no? General Comments: Adverbs , Hunter. ...

I have home internet again, so here I am, ready to (mostly) catch up! Let's get on with the show, shall we? General Comments: 1. I don't like picking on ...

HA! MIKHAIL HAS SECRETS I KNEW IT! Anyways... on with the review? General Comments: I probably have said the following in the past, but I was searching for something constructive ...

Whoo, I made it! Sorry this took me like forever. General Comments: Hmm... somehow, there just seemed to be several places where I sensed a disjoint between action and reaction, ...

I'm caught up! Hopefully I'll stay that way too, since I have actual free time now. General Comments: I love the dialogue in this story. It's so weird, but so ...

It's been what, three weeks since I read the last chapter? This is not good planning on my part. Anyways, going on: General Comments: If you're going to add in ...

Hey, Silver! I am here as promised! I figured I would steal this piece before the crazy review day people start up. You probably haven't gotten many reviews from me ...

I am giddy from the two-hour delay and measly inch of snow we got at home, so I am here early! Hoorah! Anyways, let's see what I've got. General Comments: ...

Okie dokie... General Comments: 1. To be completely honest, I think whatever you'd been doing earlier with your writing felt more alive. Adding in details where you didn't leave space ...

Um... weird methods much, Mr. Van der Brunnen? Anyways, let's get on with this review. General Comments: 1. Little note on the hyphenating of long numbers: to avoid overwhelming your ...

Ah, we finally get a glimpse of the move tiers... Minerva's got a nice set of options to pick from. General Comments: 1. As much as I appreciate the more ...