Venuschild

I love the fact that this poem has a lot imagery and metaphors. The only thing I would add is more vocabulary and to add more. The last two lines ...

Good job! This poem is beautiful and the style and format is attractive as well. I don't think I can find anything that should be changed. Keep up the good ...

Oops forgot to add what I was trying to represent. The poem is kinda written in story format. It tells a story of men chopping (chuckers) trees down in a ...

Thank you everyone for the feedback! :)

Nice! A lot of potential :) I'm pretty sure nobody will judge your work. After all we are all here to encourage each other.