Veritas

Great poem ad good content. I can perceive the feeling you're trying to give off. I think the flow needs a little work, though. I agree with what Deanie said ...

I completely understand, girl. My family comes to blows sometimes and it's hard to be caught in the middle. I wrote a poem about it called Crossfire (guess the title ...

Oh, writer's block....the pen's arch nemesis... I think we can all relate to this one. I commend you putting the pent-up frustration of all writers on earth in one poem ...

Hey! I'm Christian, but don't worry about that, I'm not here to diss you or anything :) I was just super curious because I've heard of the religion but i ...

Very beautiful and elegant. I love the freeform of it. The only thing I would suggest would be altering the second verse a bit. I don't know if it was ...