VersatileJames23

well I kinda just put it in spell check and corrected everything red, which was lazy on my part. I appreciate the review though!

thanks for the review bro

I enjoyed it was entertaining and simple ...keep it up sir.

Ahh lol ,thanks that helped.

Thanks for the criticism.I'm going to work more on my grammar.

Sad story, you have a great imagination.Keep writing! PS it would be cool if you made another story like this in a modern day type.