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VictoriaIsis

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Never The Same.

    This was really good! You really explained the emotion and the thoughts that went through Kate's mind. I think the strongest line in this was "I had to stay strong. ...

    Mar 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Thorne: Chapter One

    This was really interesting, I liked how you made her mysterious especially in the end. But the chapter was cut off so abruptly, but like therealme said it was probably ...

    Oct 30, 2013


In short, Mrs. Pontellier was beginning to realize her position in the universe as a human being, and to recognize her relations as an individual to the world within and about her.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening