VictoriaPavone

I agree. I was trying to come off polite in my review, but this is what I was aiming for. It's just too melodramatic and has no obvious meaning. It ...

I agree. I was trying to come off polite in my review, but this is what I was aiming for. It's just too melodramatic and has no obvious meaning. It ...

That's my point. In order for the reader to make their own interpretations, there must be something there for them to begin with. There wasn't enough "meat" in this piece ...

A few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing that can't be fixed. The flow of the poem is steady, with no unwanted interruptions. The overall theme of your work ...