VimesyPumpkin

Hiya, I have short poem I'd like some feedback on and would be happy to return the favour :) x

Hi there, I'm looking to get some constructive feedback on work and would be more than happy to return the favour for any I get! Here's a link to my ...

I love this, I'm sorry I can't be constructive but it's just so good! You could maybe add a setting sentence at the beginning, but anything else would ruin it. ...

Eeek! I love where's my cow! The best picture book ever :) I read it to my almost illiterate friend (he's 16) on the bus after I bought it, and ...

Thank you Heather! My favourite discworld book has to be Night Watch, I just love the ending with Vimes adn Carcer in the graveyard, it's brilliant :) How about you?

I suppose some change can be good, but I'll neve radmit it till time after it's happened. My favourite animal's are wolves :) I'm guessing your is too? Just the ...

I adore Discworld, and my favourite character is Sam Vimes. I love Billy Corgan and the Smashing Pumpkins.

This is a really good start :) You've got a good plot going, although you could possibly pace it out by adding some more description. The intro could be a ...

I really like it =) It's pleasant and lovely, gives of that sort of feeling :) I especially like the fifth line. Well done !

Well that's definetley going to be my next by :D It comes out as a film soon - I saw the advert, that's why I opened this page. Can't wait ...

Thank you! Well, I read a trilogy by Malorie Blackman not too long ago that I fell in love with.. and I love Shakespeare of course ^_^ My music taste ...

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