Virgil

This is Yams here for a review on review day! The first thing I noticed is the lack of punctuation/ or grammar errors. You start off with a lot of ...

This is Yams here for a review! I felt like this poem was the cliche love/hurt poem. "Oh my heart is tearing over him oh no what do I do?" ...

This is Yams here for a review! I don't know if I like this or dislike this so far, but here we go. God, your characters are kind of annoying ...

This is Yams here for a review. I think you could've made it snappier at her if you're actually angry at her but I can't judge because I do not ...

Hey Aura, I'm here for a quick review. I liked the formatting you used but you kind of stopped it at the end and used something else and that's just ...

This is Atsmai here for a review! First off, I like the style you wrote it in. Props to you for that. Now, I can actually help and stuff. My ...

This is Atsmai here for a review! I don't see why this has been so passed up, because I like this, but here are some ways to help improve the ...

This is Atsmai here for a review! First off, I like the format that you used. It's kind of choppy with the flow somehow. I just don't feel like you're ...

This is Atsmai here for a review! I don't really know if this what it would actually be like. I just don't think someone would write something this heartwarming or ...

Atsmai here for a quick review on review day! First off, at the end of the poem there's a period, but really, you should use punctuation, or don't use it ...

Alright, this is Atsmai here for a review! The first thing I noticed is that there are places where there should be capitalizations, like... "we have to try, these demons ...

Okay, the title was the thing that really intriuged me here, this is Atsmai here for a review! First off, okay, your character is the cliche rich girl, is this ...

Atsmai here on review day for a review! First off, instead of saying the "world's only superhero retired", say his name instead? Because it would make more sense to say ...

Atsmai here for a review on review day! Okay, the first thing I noticed is that you write in third person with judgement. Unless there is a specific person telling ...

I guess I'm here to review this since I stumbled upon it. The Haiku: I don't really understand what you're trying to make the reader feel, that the brightest colors ...