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Re: The Fire Underneath of Things - 11
This is Nikayla here dropping in for another review! So, I haven't read much of this novel. I believe that the most I've read is a chapter, and if any, ...
May 1, 2017 -
Re: Hidden Entity - 4 - The Goddess and Her Prophetess
So, I thought I'd hop in this morning for another review, and this time, it's on your chapter! I greatly appreciate the Author's Note that's at the end of the ...
May 1, 2017 -
Re: Strangers- chapter one
This is Nikayla here dropping in here for a review. I see that you have an interest in inner-monologue in this first chapter, and I have to say, I'm not ...
May 1, 2017 -
Re: Conics Unfortunately: 11
This is Nikayla here dropping in once again for another review! Keeping the Green Room clean, naturally I'm here for a review. I'm actually quite the fan of the descriptions ...
May 1, 2017 -
Re: Deleted 38
This is Nikayla here dropping in for another review near the very end of Review Day! So I like the imagery in this poem, let's get that across, though the ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: earth
I hope you don't mind me coming back for yet another review! This is Nikayla here hopping in for a review at the end of this Review Day. Nonetheless, let's ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: good bye version 2
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a quick review nearing the edge and end of Review Day! So this poem is pretty simple, and sometimes I have problems with ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Our Secret Dance
This is Nikayla here dropping in for another review at the end of Review Day! So the flow here in this piece is stronger than usual, which I enjoy. I ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: whitman-napo for 4/21/17
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day! So I'm always a fan of poems that include classic poets with a good execution, and this poem ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Addiction
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day! You asked for this. I'm not addicted to this poem, that's for sure, younger Adri. Seems like this ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 49
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day! I've expressed that I love your writing before, and this is no exception to that expression. I have ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: No Destination (Chapter 9: Homely and Lonely)
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! Not the largest fan of this chapter, particularly for the lack of plot. If there were more action or substance that ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Son of the Black - Chapter Seven of Shattered Crowns
Nikayla here dropping in for a review. Have to agree with Lumi on everything he says about this. Didn't find this very enjoyable and I'll just go ahead and outright ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: These Brilliant and Beautiful Lies: Ch10 Pt1
This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! I don't believe I've ever read or reviewed a piece of yours, but I have to say that from what I've ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 21 (Betelgeuse)
Woah. I love this chapter. There's a lack of an actual Avery Trent in this chapter, but I don't mind, because dang. I enjoyed this chapter for the new perspective ...
Apr 30, 2017