Virgil

This is Kaos here for a quick review! So haikus generally are based off nature and I think that this is something interesting to base it off of. I really ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The first thing that I mentioned was the kind of excessive use of cutting off words and I didn't really like this. Only ...

This is Kaos here for a review! Jumping right into this chapter but I'll see what I can do. The start of the chapter is quite confusing and I wanted ...

This is Kaos here for a review! You need to get a grammar checker. There are grammar and punctuation errors everywhere in this story but I'll cover a few. Commas ...

This is Kaos here for a review! Something that I wanted to point out that I don't know if it has or not before is that this is an awkward ...

This is Kaos here for a review! beyond daydreams of finding warmth in christmas-themed boxer briefs, nightmares consist of breaking their nose with two and a half punches and watching ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The concept of the story could be made into something interesting, but that's not how I felt about this poem. So, you're telling ...

This is Kaos here for a review! when I gaze up at the night sky, I see dragons made of starlight gliding on wings of glass; i feel they could ...

This is Kaos here for a review! So this was a poem that was wrapped up in itself in the sense that it doesn't explore any other poetic devices and ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The structure of this poem was interesting, it felt like more of a sequence of letters than a poem to me in this ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I thought that the poem set up a tone but didn't quite fully deliver on that. It's heartfelt in the sense that it's ...

This is Kaos here for a review! i. I am cold, and she is watching me. My veins flood with ice, each breath bringing frost into my lungs. She is ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The way that the words are worded is the thing that drew me to this poem, and is probably the strength of it. ...

This is Kaos here for a review! The imagery is weird in the first stanza, but not really something that I would have thought of, it's in a new perspective. ...

This is Kaos here for a review! I count the days before you come back to me. The light blue clock ticks, ticks, ticks, Measuring the distance between us in ...