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Re: Don't Bother Trying
This is Kaos here for a review! The first thing I noticed about this poem is that it doesn't really have any diversity in line length or punctuation usage, which ...
Oct 4, 2016 -
Re: The Phoenix
This is Kaos here for a review! So it seems like you've been experimenting more with the imagery aspect of poetry, and slowly it seems like you're progressing. In my ...
Oct 2, 2016 -
Re: Ashen Faced
This is Kaos here for a review! I liked the imagery that you used with this poem. It was nice and worked well, but I didn't really like that there ...
Oct 2, 2016 -
Re: The Death of The Artist as a Desperate Young Boy
This is Kaos here for a review on FRIDAY MORNING. I have a tendency to write these and for the subject matter to die. I'm sorry, David Bowie, I wouldn't ...
Oct 2, 2016 -
Re: Meerkats anonymous
This is Kaos here for a review! lightening brands my ears the wind sighs as she recounts the tale of summer when the memory of rain was worth more than ...
Oct 2, 2016 -
Re: i don't understand myself anymore
This is Kaos here for a review! One thing I do have to say is that this poem is relatable in the subject/idea of it, but I didn't really prefer ...
Oct 1, 2016 -
Re: Story of the Buried
This is Kaos here for a review! The scribbles made me witness ugliness like discovering zombies. I squeezed the paper until it suffocated and dumped it in the dustbin. This ...
Oct 1, 2016 -
Re: Silent Feelings
This is Kaos here for a review! The tears roll down my cheeks as I set down my silent phone. My mind flashes back to all the pain I have ...
Oct 1, 2016 -
Re: small
This is Kaos here for a review! unexpressed thoughts and silent tears i tell her to leave me alone “i hate you,” i say “i know,” she says The first ...
Sep 30, 2016 -
Re: Wouldn't change a thing
This is Kaos here for a review! Quick note before I start, you said that you were sorry that it didn't rhyme, but poetry definitely doesn't have to. Not all ...
Sep 30, 2016 -
Re: My emotional puzzle.
This is Kaos here for a review. I not only feel them but I see them too, Not only mine either, others too. Fact is Sometimes theirs are easier to ...
Sep 30, 2016 -
Re: It Has Worsened
This is Kaos here for a review! A small note before I actually get into the contents of the review. There aren't any stanzas here and I don't know if ...
Sep 29, 2016 -
Re: deleted
This is Kaos here for a review! So this is described at the end of the poem as "a story" so I'm going to be judging that part as well ...
Sep 28, 2016 -
Re: Not SO Imaginary
This is Kaos here for a review! A small note before I actually start reviewing the poem is that I felt like the "SO" in the title didn't have to ...
Sep 28, 2016 -
Re: Love And Freedom
This is Kaos here for a review! I have phobia Phobia of love. It makes a cage Inside gets trapped me and my freedom. If you're going to use these ...
Sep 27, 2016