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  • Writing Tutorials Re: Description

    I really liked your tutorial, especially the part about setting descriptions, as those are what I have most problems with. You know what you should add to this? A complex ...

    Dec 13, 2013
  • Lounge, The Re: Review Teams

    Reviewer. 1. a 2. a and e 3. c 4. c and n 5. a 6. a and i 7. e 8. f and i 9. c

    Jun 5, 2012
  • Other Poetry Re: A Shoulder to Cry On

    Not sure about the capital 'O' in the title. Generally, this is the most recent one. It comes in two versions: song one and poem one. I still can't decide ...

    Oct 13, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Power of a Smile

    At school we had an assignment to write a spin-off short story about 'Romeo and Juliet'--you know, destined love, death and stuff. So, this is generally that, plus one of ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I used to be a butterfly

    I wrote it thinking about my messed up childhood, but soon it turned out that it's very universal, as it's speaking of lost chances and unjust episodes. I used to ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Other Re: Time for a change?

    Wow. Interesting. The form is very unique. I don't wanna be picky about minor things, but... I have learnt. So much much from failing. That I gave up on winning. ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Other Re: Head in the clouds

    "Oh, so now you tell me it was figurative." Buahahahaah XD Well, you so made me chuckle. Good thinking, though. I can't help but remember how everyone was so pissed ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Dolly Doll's

    I always found Christmas break, well, boring. Maybe it's because I hate the snow, the cold, all the lights and why the hell is everyone so damned cheerful. These may ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Two Little Beautiful Girls

    Good gods, I'm speechless. And I still can't feel my knees. And I didn't cry, though it was close, but apparently the language barrier kept me from tears. Good, otherwise ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: september eighth

    OH MY GODS. Amazing. Simply amazing. I was shivering all the time. I'm a huge fan of everything that doesn't say it all, that has unfinished thoughts and that should ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: A howler form Mars 2

    Okay, I must admit, I chuckled several times. Buuut. That would be about that. First of all, I think you should proof-read it again, 'cause you have some minor spelling ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Itna-tsirhc

    Amazing. Somehow, the usage of words and the dark climate of the poem, they send a shiver down your spine. The title sounds like a name of some kind of ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Other Re: just cold

    Okay, I don't get it. But I'm touched. The only explanation I can think of is that the protagonist's friend was ice/snow and they disappeared in a blizzard, but it ...

    Sep 21, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Chapter 4 (Unknown Title)

    Poland :D

    Sep 10, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Chapter 4 (Unknown Title)

    I have no idea what those crackers are, but as I suppose, they're made of some kind of corn, so it's cool :) Glad I could help. About Mathew, that's ...

    Sep 10, 2011


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