Vryx

This is Vryx here :) Great playing with words cj--- im not really the technical type but I could say that your master piece is smooth ^_^ as in flawless. ...

:) not to repeat things that was said, I could say this is a BEUTIFUL poem. Great job at the concept and wise utilization of words. You introduced it with ...

Thanks for the healthy criticism :)

Thanks Paola Marie ^_^

Awww...^_^ thanks! Yes Ivy, I composed this and mixed rhythms and tunes to form a song... I performed it on stage and proposed :)))

Plain but deep --- also,not really a poem ;) keep writing

Great reflection. I felt touched

Great work :) Keep It simple but creative

Great Dramatic and simple poem :) Great job Aley

I admire the concept :) it took a creative cranium to write the reality faced by every Examinee in terror... Nice Job bro--- I took the same exam last year... ...