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Hi jakethegenius! This was a really interesting story! I didn't see the end coming, which is impressive because I don't get surprised easily. I liked the way you mixed the ...

Hi Liferunner!!! This was really good! I especially love the vocabulary you used. I'm always trying to find that happy medium where the wording is advanced but doesn't distract from ...

Aw! I love this poem. I think my favorite line was the last. So, I’d rather lie here and cry for you, Because it’s going to be tougher to forget ...

This is great! I was wondering if you had personal experiences with this. That's so sad! (But don't give up! I know how you feel, but it'll get better.) I ...

I actually disagree with Omnihat. I love the I long to belong; That's probably one of my favorite lines. I don't know why; it just seems poetic. Overall, I love ...

Wow! That was really good! I love it! It's kind of twisted to think that Death is good, but it's a cool thought. I love how you made Madness a ...

Why is there not a "Love" button? This was beautiful! I think I might print it off and hang it on my wall to remind myself everyday to thank Him. ...

Awesome poem! I liked how you used "evermore" in it. It made it sound more... (I don't know) professional. Maybe it's because all the poems I like are older. I ...

I disagree with VampireLover101 too. I thought this piece was beautiful and what's a better reason to write poetry then when you are inspired? I can't think of a better ...

I'm sorry, but you lost me after the "F" bomb. It surprised me, and kinda ruined the rest of the poem for me. The rest was good. I agree with ...

I thought it was an awesome poem! It was short, sweet, simple, and cute! I did wish it was longer, but that's perfectly fine. I didn't get the part where ...

Nice poem! Cool idea. Nice, short, and sweet. Other then the small nitpicks from Demoness, everything looked great. I wish it was longer, and I love poems so much more ...

Awesome. Just awesome. I loved it! I'm not going to be really picky about anything, mostly because it doesn't need it. Your rhyme scheme was perfect. The poem flows nicely ...

Great job! I loved it! My only suggestion is to fix a few puncuation errors, especially at the end of a stanza. But other then that, it flows smoothly and ...

Wow! That was cool! I loved the feeling of the poem. It... was just awesome. I really can't think of another word to describe it. I didn't see any grammer ...