WRITINGNEON

I like this :) really good sorry i'm bad and pointing out the bad in stories so this isnt the most helpfull review sorry :( But i really like this ...

That is amazing! The whole point of it is great, It's a quite beautifull peice. I like how you describe it as a story how in the future you will ...

first of all on the first line were you say "I died and tried tried and died" you didnt capitalize the I leaving it as "i diead and tried treid ...

I love this! i'm slightly dissipointed that this exceptional peice is not longer.... But it is trully awesome! I will be honest with you it feels more as a draft ...

This is exceptional! The story is defenitly diferent but normal isn't good so i loved it! I'm not exactly sure if it is about a girl locked out of her ...

That was awesome it started out like a happy poem and ended rather dramatic, defenitly one of those poems that glues you to read even more! It almost brings chills! ...

I... I... love it! And yes it defenitly fits in dramatic poetry, I love the story that it tells it's almost narative poetry! I absoloutly love it, i know i ...

I love this! the only mistake i found is "afresh." it should have been a fresh other than that i absoloutly loved it! exceptional work. There are so many talented ...

This was so good, you use exceptional wordage in your poems, it brings them to life! There are no mistakes in this poem as far as i see, You write ...

This was amazing! my favorite part is: No opinions, never firing up my cannons, Shooting out my bullets, Under suppression pleasing others. This poem is amazing, i wish i could ...

That was well poetic! i guess it's a poem it's supposed to be poetic. But i read alot of poetry on here and i am a poet in myself but ...

this is verry good! the only mistake is this Catches you up, Never lets you you had a comma yet you still capitalized never, but this poem is verry strong ...

This is amazing! You are a true poet! It all fits so poeticly! The rymeing is exceptional! i like the story behind it, it really tells about jesse james. there ...

I liked it other than this part here: I grasped tightly to that promise, To that world in your eyes Until it was the only ground, The only solid footing ...

Aweome, no wait extroidanary! wait wait amazing! and did i mention exilerating! and it rocks and it's cool!!! :) :) you get the point i really like it