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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lonely September Testicles

    I'm not completely sure what I just read, but I know damn well that this is my sort of humor. :D I'm guessing you're informing the world that you're not ...

    Oct 6, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Corpse Pile

    Brilliant. Simply brilliant. I could go on and point out things I liked the most, but meh, I've nothing more to say. I feel horrid for writing such a horrid ...

    Oct 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Tie me up and love me

    Wow, a really nice piece and I definitely enjoyed it. I speak from personal experience that a rhyme scheme can be a real pain in the backside, but you pulled ...

    Oct 1, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: All that happened

    Hey! I'm going to be the odd one out and not tell you to smack in more details. I get the sense that this was meant to just be a ...

    Sep 29, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: My Dark Angel- Prologue

    Hey! So I'm gonna do the obvious think and point out that it might be a bit too short. But then again, I did want to know what happened next, ...

    Sep 29, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Game On (Level 5)

    Aaaand here we are. You created some definite tension in this one, especially between Crodela and the MC. Tension is good. I also enjoy your lack of care when it ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Game On (Level 4)

    I don't know how, but you managed to slip this past me. O: I was checking out my feed and noticed you had already posted Level 5, so I got ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Apocalpse:What now? Prologue

    Heyou, I figured as you were going through my work, I had to at least come here and check yours out. Frankly, I'm glad I did. No, this might not ...

    Sep 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Space Between Infinity- 1

    Heya, I'll be ignoring all the earlier comments, so if there are some redundancies, blame them on my laziness. Also, I just pulled an all-nighter so forgive me any small ...

    Sep 11, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: You aren't supposed to remember -A 9/11 memoir

    Hiya, Mr. Impressed here to revi- no wait, just comment really. :D So, Mr. Impressed is Impressed, as you might've already fathomed from my introduction. This has meaning; it has ...

    Sep 7, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Game On (Level 2)

    Heya, here again for some thoughts! I have to say, I was really, really happily surprised to see how much your writing - technically that is; as in commas and ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Game On (Level 1)

    Yo, I was happily surprised to see you had put up the second chapter as well. Let's dive right in. Another good chapter all in all, I really am starting ...

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Game On (Level 0)

    Heya, Life here to throw a few things your way! :) This is a really solid piece of writing. The humor was effecient, and kinda reminded me of my own ...

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Toy Guns

    Hey, Life here to give a few thoughts. I really, really liked this. You had a very strong atmosphere going on, and your choice of vocabulary effectively enhanced that feeling. ...

    Aug 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Ka! Ta! Na!

    Hi there, Life here to comment (as you can't really call this is a review). :) Off the bat, this had that hint of epicosity which rang well with the ...

    Aug 7, 2011


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