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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Silent Speaker (Prologue)

    Hey there! So the title of this story intrigued me. The thought of a silent speakers like telekinetic people is a generous notion actually. :) I liked how the chapter ...

    Jul 8, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Insomnia

    Hey, FromWithin! Waltzing here! Kill me now, how come I only saw this today?! XD I love this so much. You have beautiful imagery and diction! it's making me jealous ...

    Jul 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: The Visible and The Invisible- Chapter 2

    Here I am again! I thought of ignoring him and staying in my place for a while. -So all verbs would be parallel. In return, I yelled irritably, “Don’t I ...

    Jun 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Thick Heart

    *salutes* Here for a review, and a review I will give to this wonderfully penned work. I'm not much of a poetry buff to criticize your work on the technical ...

    Jun 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: The Visible and The Invisible- Chapter 1

    Hey there! Here to review your chapter! *pops confetti canon* Yay! First the nitpicks so I can drown you in praises later on: “Dad, I will be going to Kaniyakumari ...

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The Book Lender

    *salutes* Here for a review! Came by your title, found it interesting...and boy, I'm glad I read it! It's a really cute story you got here. I love how you ...

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: His Dirty Deed | Unedited

    Heyo! Here to return the favor since you reviewed my works! ^^ I love this, really I do. The reality of the struggles of this guy was clearly very evident ...

    Jun 17, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Our Generation is Obsessed With Perfection and Popularity: Are you One of Them?

    *salutes* Greetings, YWSer! Stopped by for a review on an essay since...it's totally my fave kind of work to review. :) Alright first off, you picked a nice topic to ...

    Jun 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Dramatic Re: The Drowners -1-

    *salutes* Passing by, found a cool title, decided to read the chapter... definitely not disappointed. ;) I love where this story is going! It is sad and true: realistic and ...

    Jun 11, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Heart of Silver Gold: Chapter One

    *salutes* Here for a review! I will first enumerate on the nitpicks: I run down my stairs to see my mom and dad smiling at me; the smell of freshly ...

    Jun 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: A Wind Twin. Part One.

    Hey! Welcome to YWS! :) Just dropped by for a review. So, I see that this one's your first work here. This part one was okay, but I saw a ...

    Jun 9, 2015
  • Script » General, General Re: The Voice

    Good god, I love this! :D I really do! The music and the camera angles were perfect for the atmosphere, the story itself is a great concept. The concept of ...

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Action / Adventure Re: Tallon chapter 1

    Hey there! This seems like an interesting read when the rest of it comes out. I liked how nonchalant your main narrator for this chapter was and also the cliffhanger(ish) ...

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Her Boss | Unedited

    Happy review day!!! Even though I'm not part of the teams cuz I have an appointment today! First of all, thank you for making that request, and giving me such ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Don't go

    Hello! Here for a review! Just like to say that i love this. The story is true to all of those clingy loves! I had a similar experience too with ...

    May 27, 2015


I wonder if people felt the freedom in our culture to love louder, if they'd be quicker to say "I miss you" when the absence of someone is felt instead of just thinking it.
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