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  • Other » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: I Believe

    Hey, Sybil here! I'm not much of a RoTG fan, but I can really appreciate this fan fic. I've written some fan fics of my own and I'd liked to ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Invitation of a Heart

    Hey Sybil here ^.^ This short reminds me much of E.A. Poe! As you can already assume, I'm a big fan of these horror shorts :) this is really nice! ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Warden's Son

    Hello, Sybil here to say a few things! First thing's first...I cannot describe how much I liked this piece! It was very well written! Very vivid and clear! Though the ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Field Slaves

    Hey! I'd just like to say how much this piece reminds me so much of a Browning poem. It's nice and lyrical, when I read it out loud, the words ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: FAREWELL, HELLO

    Hey! First thing's first, this was a really good piece! I didn't see any nitpicks or what! ^^ The very title was promising, and I will say that I was ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: We are who we are

    Hello! This is a nice piece you go here, reminds much of a self-absorbed society that we are now in. I liked the message of it. Much like a dramatic ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Just a Spark

    Hey, Sybil here! First thing's first, welcome to YWS! :D I liked how idealistic this is! More of a speech than a poem, if I may say. ;) Good job ...

    Dec 26, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Secrets

    Hello, it's Sybil again! Once again, you have displayed literary skill that is beyond your years! You write like a true author in the making! (I should know, I check ...

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A tale in a letter.

    Hey Burrow, just passed by! :) Got really interested with the title because I've seen a lot of stories told in correspondence :). I just have to say that you ...

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: For not a moment, time did halt

    Hello Sybil here! :) What can I say, I loved this so much! I really felt your emotion in this piece, wonderful imagery, good wording and it wasn't at all ...

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Short Story » Satire, Mystery / Suspense Re: Bloody Screams of Murder in the Night

    Hello Sybil here :) Gosh, this was a really cute one for a short! Plot twist was really unexpected! I liked how descriptive you were on the first few scenes ...

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: Done.

    Hey! Sybil here to say a few words About your piece :) First of all, the poem started strong and the story was very intriguing. There was a good beat ...

    Dec 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Let's Be Sheep.

    Sybil here! ;) Before I review this, I'd just like to say that I noticed what you did there...Being called Sheep and your avatar. I sense Le Petit Prince in ...

    Dec 22, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Butts

    Hello! Sybil here ;) Okay, I cannot tell you how much I love this! There were few errors and the story's flow was in pace. Your narration was perfectly comedic ...

    Dec 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Yet Not

    Hello :) This piece really speaks to me. I find it perfect for being named in the realistic genre. It was consistent and the wording was well chosen. Your title ...

    Dec 21, 2014


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