Wandwaver

I'm so lost in all these! It is good. That ending is haunting. KEEP IT UP, BUDDY, WE'VE GOT A LONG NIGHT AHEAD OF US!

It's good...boy, do I know what that feeling is like, and...boy, did this bring me back there! Is there more? WW

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A prologue should catch the reader's attention so that they are irrevocably lost in your world. Here, basically, all you did was state that a new shipyard had been christened. ...

Yeah, isn't Jack the guy who started the fire?

PLEASE, ARVY, YWS IS BURNING TO CHARR! WHERE IS THE WATER BUCKET???

WHERE IS THE WATER BUCKET!!

It should be "too." I agree with Ohhewwo whole heartedly. This was very imaginative. There are two ways to handle "cute" characters; embrace the trend or push away from it. ...

Congratualations! :lol:

It is good, but remember that every time a new character speaks, you start a new paragraph. It's just confusing otherwise. Each paragraph needs to develop one thought, sight, or ...

MAN, I LOVE CAL'S SIGGY! Haha! So true!

I know this is a double post, but how is this?

Thanks. No doubt with the edit I'll get it right in the next few days. I've been crunched on time tonight.

Both meanings of the name are very cool! What's wrong with being an innocent lamb? :lol:

i'm the only one to have had "up to fifty!" I have lucid dreams quite frequently. I'm not a heavy sleeper. I'm, like, aware of the fact that I'm sleeping, ...