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WannabeWriter112

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: What did we do Wrong ~ A Bullying Awareness Poem

    This poem touches on the serious issue of bullying and I can definitely relate, so thank you for writing this. You poured a lot of emotion into this and it ...

    Nov 12, 2016
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Can't Rise

    This is a very powerful piece of writing that I think could really impact others who have dealt with physical abuse as well as people like me who haven't had ...

    Oct 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: The Fall

    This poem is a great example of the power of few words. You brought so much thought and feeling through in this short piece, and I love it. I truly ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The True Monster

    This story was interesting and I really like the idea of a female knight. It's a rather unique idea. However, the story had a couple grammar flaws and I have ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, General Re: In one hour

    I absolutely loved this. It is an intriguing story that draws the reader in. However, I wish that I knew why exactly this event happened to her and if her ...

    Jun 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Rocks

    This poem is a good example of somebody looking at the simple things in life and showing how important they truly can be. Look at the beauty in life and ...

    Jun 10, 2016
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: A happier life

    I know how you feel about not being comfortable around others and feeling like a third wheel. When I was younger, I had a group of friends that all seemed ...

    Jun 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Culture Re: Lies and Deceit- Chapter 1 *Edited*

    I loved this. It's nice to see a strong female character not letting herself be pushed into doing what somebody wants her to do. Women need to know that they ...

    Jun 10, 2016


You have to be a bit of a liar to tell a story the right way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind